Perfection Comes Slowly

I wrote this at about 3:00 this morning, and I'm really rather happy with it, so it'd really mean a lot to me if you guys'd read it. Yes, it's fanfiction, and yes it's Harry Potter, and yes it's slash, but I'm more pleased with the way it's written than the actual content so if you could just read it and tell me what you think... Please? Pretty please?

It's the most spontaneous thing I've ever written. I think I like myself when I'm spontaneous.

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings: Various among Lily, James, Remus, Sirius, and an anonymous male
Rating: Umm...PG or PG-13. There's mention of shagging, but no actual doing it. No actual kissing either. One swear.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters, except the anonymous male who I invented for his like, five lines of dialogue. So please don't sue me, and know that I'm not making any money off this, becasue if I was I'd have a paid account.

Enjoy!

( Perfection Comes Slowly )

I know, I know. That last line. I know. I blame George Lucas.

This is still undergoing editing, so input and concrit are welcome!
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