One Line Fic
Jun. 28th, 2006 12:06 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
leia131Version 1:
It was a good many years after Sirius had died when Remus finally realized that he never felt really, truly alive unless the stars were out.
Version 2:
It took a good many years after Sirius had died for Remus to realize that he never felt really, truly alive unless the stars were out.
Version 3:
It took Remus a good many years after Sirius' death to realize that he had never in his life felt really and truly alive unless the stars were out.
I like how each one means something slightly different.
It was a good many years after Sirius had died when Remus finally realized that he never felt really, truly alive unless the stars were out.
Version 2:
It took a good many years after Sirius had died for Remus to realize that he never felt really, truly alive unless the stars were out.
Version 3:
It took Remus a good many years after Sirius' death to realize that he had never in his life felt really and truly alive unless the stars were out.
I like how each one means something slightly different.
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Date: 2006-06-29 03:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-06-29 08:06 pm (UTC)