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Aug. 26th, 2006 01:19 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
So I wrote a drabble, exactly 100 words, of which I am very proud. (Standard HP stuff, though sadder than usual.)
Here you go! See if you can't figure out what's been stuck in my head for the past week.
No one mourns the wicked.
If there was anything less true, in all of history, Remus didn’t know what it could possibly be. At least, for him.
He mourned the wicked, mourned the four friends lost, mourned the good times never to be seen again, mourned their dead past as well as their now impossible happy future.
The rest of the world was rejoicing, ding dong the witch is dead, and Remus could think only of tousled black hair, laughing green eyes, pudgy five-fingered hands, and a cocky well-bred smile to melt his heart, gone forever.
I mourn you all.
Standard requests apply. All comments and critiques are welcome.
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Date: 2006-08-26 03:58 pm (UTC)<33MuchLove
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Date: 2006-08-26 05:21 pm (UTC)It's supposed to be sad...
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Date: 2006-08-27 03:44 am (UTC)...and that's my sob story explanation, with sentences starting with plenty of conjunctions...
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It made me happy because it was deep. I think. I don't know.
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Date: 2006-08-27 03:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-08-27 04:20 am (UTC)But it now makes sense how it could make you happy, so yay! I'm glad you like it!
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Date: 2006-08-27 02:35 am (UTC)I'm REALLYREALLY glad had him mourn happier times, instead of hating Peter like Sirius. (Which, I find totally justifiable too, but for Remus, it would make more sense to miss happy!Peter.)
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Date: 2006-08-27 03:38 am (UTC)But I was also working off the fact that at this point, Remus thinks Sirius killed Peter... So he still thinks Peter is good. (He's really mourning wicked!Sirius, because I'm a diehard Wolfstar shipper, and he loooooooves Sirius...)
But I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!
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Date: 2006-08-27 06:01 am (UTC)oic, I thought this was after ootp, but it's really before poa, right? :) Still amazing :DD
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Date: 2006-08-28 02:23 am (UTC)But you read it anyway you like. :)